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    Personal project and many, many question to solve...

    Hi,
    just started this little study from imagination and after spending some time, I found myself in a jungle of problems which I ''need'' to solve and don't know the answers too. I think many of my issues are seen right away so if anybody want to break it down you are very welcome. I'm open for communication ;-. Peace
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    Off the bat the dark circles around the pecs(?) and hand look weird. Blend those out. They really stick out when you convert this all to B&W.


    I don't know how much of this is intentionally "stylized", but the lighting throws me off. It's not consistent with the guy in the middle nor the demon monkey on his back.


    The sword hand is a blob.. and that arm is lacking normal shaping.


    Given where the torso goes down I am not certain that thigh actually connects to it.


    Not terribly interesting at the moment, but it has potential.
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