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    Critiques please

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    Take a look at how the tip of the baby's nose relates to the eye behind it and also note the angle of the baby's philtrum. You're doing well though!
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    I like it overall. I would lighten the values in the eye and mouth a bit, or darken values elsewhere -- otherwise it gives a bit of a 'demon baby' vibe.

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    TYVM David. I see it now. I think Iím gonna call it a win for now the last time I tried fixing the nose I had to do the whole thing all over again

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    Ty Bunny. I see what u mean. Iíll give it a shot.

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    You know you drew a demon baby right?

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    Yes thank you somebody already mentioned that

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    try sketching out proportions first and then take some time to get the proportions right from the reference image. That would make your sketch even more accurate and realistic...btw keep up the work

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