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    improved painting traditionaly?

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    thanks!!!
    look at this one,,,,,,,
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    That second one is a muddy mess and already is looking like it will have lighting issues.

    What was your paint of choice in the top vs the bottom?
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    the top one,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
    see this pencil not finished,,,,,,,,,,
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    Perhaps use your 'sketchbook' thread.
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    but its going to be painted,,,,,,,,,,,,,!traditionaly

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    heres another one ,,,you see it blackn white in other of my posts and notice that the lines are all alined like if it was matematical,,,,,,,,,,,,,,?
    hope you like it in traditional color,,!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    It is a big mess, with colours. Why don't you go back to basics, and do some simple still lifes, done up to and including completion?
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    I sort of like it but I think it could be a lot better after you've done and done a load of master studies. Do not neglect studies.

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    what do you think of this one,,,,,,,,,?
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    The coloring is not helping nor what ever those half circle spoke things on the left are.
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    its an emblem to suround the painting,,,but went wrong tahts why tou see oil there in the meddle brake,,,,it was watwrcolor the original,
    tou are right,,,,,,

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    this is digital,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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