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    103 Baldwin Avenue (CC please)

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    16x20 Acrylic on Canvas, painted over the course of a month, on and off. Preparing to finalize this piece, but was curious if I should rethink anything in particular. Please let me know your thoughts. Thanks!


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    Looking neat so far. My biggest issue right now are the shadows not really syncing up in some places, especially over the pink door. Maybe this is a photo reference you're working from, and that's just how it is in the photo? In that case, this would be a good time to alter some things to establish some continuity.

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    This is purely subjective. Lemme know what you think.

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    wow, great interpretation and yes i am working from a photo reference. The shadow falling of the lefthand side of the center house actually goes up much higher toward the left, causing the trees on the far lefthand side of the painting to get much less light, compare to the trees in the Center-left. With regard to the right-side of the painting, These trees do not exist in real life. I will have to change the shading of the right hand side. Thanks for critiqueing!

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    I was assuming the grey on the house was a defect or patch in the stucco. If it is a shadow then the lighting you are showing is not intuitively obvious.
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    Thanks, i'll attempt to lighten this up.

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