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    Transparent Materials Study

    Hey guys, I've been working on this transparent materials exercise from Sam Nielson's colour and light course on Schoolism, and I feel like I've hit a wall. Does anyone have any critiques?

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    I am not a master of technique but just as a viewer, the only item that looks off to me is the grapes. Glass and bubbles look right as very crisp sharp objects but the grapes seem pasted in and not sitting as they should from gravity or showing normal organic defects.

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    I feel like the shadow in the grapes would have some color in them. Not as intense as the blue or orange, but some notation of the light bouncing off the grape skin. You did a decent job with the cup and the ball, but the ball looks like it's a bit unfinished. I like it overall as a study.

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    Thanks guys, completely agreed, I'll do my best fix everything

    I forgot to mention that this is actually part of a Schoolism course, and the base lineart was provided.

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