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    Honest critique wanted for this piece

    A piece from last year,

    Drawn using Krita
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    I dig it.. A nice sketch... though that is a lot of unnecessary orange empty space.


    Given the lighting I don't believe that would be the correct ground shadow.. or face shadow.
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    Her left breast is oddly placed in relation to her shoulders.
    (viewer's right)
    Sketchbook

    We could be struck by lightning at any moment. What kind of universe is that?

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    Yeah, I'm also kinda confused by the large empty space.

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    Thanks. I actually cropped out all the empty space in another version I posted

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    I didn't notice that mistake, thanks for pointing it out

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