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    graphic nobel truble editing..text in spanish

    theres a 1000 to edit this, is this one of the fine ones?
    page1 n 4
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    Well, the best way for layout is using indesign. But this will not solve your core issues cutting out images...lol
    the Ink

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    A graphic novel needs to have a sense of the story flowing within and between scenes to tell a story. I am not seeing that in what you posted.

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    You can't honestly think this is a good way of presenting a graphic novel. This looks like someone's really really rough notes done in word.

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    well..how do i do?

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    its page 1 and 4,,,if you read the hole text you would understand how the boy shepard of wolves reaches his deamnd mother..........

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    this first ....


    , Knowledge of my spirit lies in what takes my soul to suffocate ignorance of
    reflexes.
    key dark eternity, I pastored old wolves icy look, walk and ran free on forest trails guided by the ethereal moonlight silver ,.
    The red orb lit the way the child by the wild look thirsty god; on Mount he led the wolves as brothers of his race, and they ran with the wind like ally free crossed the mountain as sacred spirits, the eyes of the Lord in the face of a wild boy calm cold;
    Silence, darkness; whispers, laughter in the wind, pure and somber grace, as the mana flowing blue clouds above the earth and sand;
    The child slows the pack; stops and wolves walking in circles around him;



    The child comes down from the mountain to the river wolves left behind
    She river running through forest
    White marble altar in the river; the child's eyes;

    in the middle of the river, sacred angel looking at the stars, recognizing part of a form created ancestrally, semi-submerged in the river broken by decades of stellar brightness at night prophetic sacred marble moon; captive the child observes the image of purity.
    , Marble platforms between the current of the water.

    light reflecting all the premonitory, emits or breathe air so white and frozen lost in the night sky and mingles with the light of all the stellar tears;
    ancient ruins eternally purified




    Mother hopes, smiles; submerged her naked body against Temple tiles ,; immersed, quiet against the tide that has, gives the face to the stars, the wind flow in small ancestors fireflies;
    The little boy is at hand;
    I scope to go beyond space has the spirit of a maddened deity within me is only the eternal echo of his voice, I know; human centuries, the eternal hear whispers
    -asiendo your stray thoughts, mother, it is all I can see ....
    With eyes closed talks
    _ I am pain hundreds of looks in the mirrors of lust; on the threshold of a distant dimension ... ..





    _ .. Again my eyes see the world; definitely the time, it's a game
    a stone circle and corroded metal
    before traversing the shadow frozen liquid which transports between worlds,
    a hand apocaliptica speed traps a white light particle, the center of the closed hand the core of a abysmally dark sphere distorting space and stops the second time extends;

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    What you have is at best some kind of illustrated short story. I would suggest pulling examples of the type of work you are trying to create and studying them.

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    first page,,,,,,,,,,do you like?
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