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    Stuck on composition and colors

    Been working on this for the better part of a day now and I've hit a wall. I like the overall subject but, something is just not clicking and I can't put my finger on it... This is obviously still in the very early stages so, any input/feedback would be appreciated.

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    You're probably just bored with the idea. Rather, not the idea per-say but the execution. Most of these compositions are pretty similar. Maybe try going for more dramatic angles?

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    I would suggest having her look back into the frame otherwise everything point off-page to the left

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