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    Critique

    it's a quick doodle, anything to improve?
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    Look at real faces for reference. Right now her neck is too thin, her eyes are symbols instead of real eyes, her nose is disproportionate and crooked, her lips are too close to her nose, her jaw line is funky, and there's not enough area above the eyes for her brain. Keep in mind that eyes mark the halfway point in the head.

    The rendering is nice though.

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    thanks!

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    I like the feeling she has, I would suggest putting more spirit in the eyes and using more contrast

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