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    Unfinished work

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    I like your colors and the overall feel of the work, but IMHO the composition is jarring. The focus at the bottom is cut of and the perspective on the ruins doesn't match the vertical figures int he foreground. I would suggest getting critique on some composition thumbnails before jumping in.

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