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    Critic Needed

    I just finished this illustration, but before I post it, I would like to receive your remarks and comments.

    Thanks in advance.


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    Holy fucking shit.
    Sketchbook

    We could be struck by lightning at any moment. What kind of universe is that?

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    Thanks for take your time to look at my post. Can I have your advice? Do I have to do a general fix? Something in particular?

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    study anatomy! each body part have their issues. you need to study proper muscle anatomy. boobs are just round balls. also, the values are all over the place, where is your light source? something about the colors are off, too. I dont get your background choice.

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    Thanks for your remarks, I'll take note of them. Hope I can fix those items.

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