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    Hey guys! I want to create cartoon Illustration.

    I want to create cartoon Illustration. I started paint sketch. Please, give me feedback.Name:  Untitled-1.jpg
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    Try fleshing it out more, color, etc.
    My commentary is a gift to you.

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    Idk what style you're aiming for, and learning from real life is never a bad idea. BUT - for the most part, this turtle looks like a copy from a 3d model or a photograph, which isn't exactly "cartoony".

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    You really need to start thinking about construction https://drawabox.com/

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    The sea stars stand out as not matching the perspective in the scene.

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    Without telling us what you were hoping to depict, you hobble our critiques. Now go and work out what you are trying to depict and why, then report back.

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