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    last sketch

    Hello,
    I would like to receive your impressions and critiques in order to improve my sketch...Thank you in advance



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    All of the stock you've used for the far people are sitting on the same plane and they each have differing perspectives as they were taken from different sources I'm guessing? Either paint over them to fix the perspective or find better stock. At the moment it feels very flat. Also many elements are see through from low opacity, never have characters at different opacities when matte painting, just make them lighter as you push them into the background.

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