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    My try in line art

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Size:  78.7 KBMy first line art try. 1 day. Dont know wat wrong with this. But its look bad, even without color. If anyone know how to work with color in Sketchbook to make its like in old comics(dull and soft)?
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    What the heck is 'lain art'?
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    Laine/ line art/ Лайн арт am not goot in eng especially if i should write something.

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    The main issue is that all your lines look the same. For instance, the chin gets the same line as her nose, which suggests her nose is the same bulky boney material as her chin.
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    The lines hardly seem like the main issue.

    It looks bad because she looks like she got hit by a steam roller on top of her god-given birth defects. There's so much need for non-broken proportion here that I don't feel like it'd even be useful to mention anything specific.

    google: human proportions

    That should get you going in the right direction.
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