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    Looking for feedbacks and critics to improve

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    Don't go over a line more than once. Try drawing with a fineliner for a while. It will make your lines more efficient.

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    Thank you very much. So you think that i must try ink with pen for the next drawings ?

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    You may also wish to increase the contrast in key areas like the eyes or anywhere you find particularly interesting. It's also difficult to judge the quality of someone's work when it's bent in half and each half is at a different angle. We need to be able to see the whole thing at 90 degrees.
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    We could be struck by lightning at any moment. What kind of universe is that?

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    Thank you for your critic. Yes I will take a better photo. Have you some tips / tutorials about shadows and lights for have more interesting renderings ?

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    Thank you very much. I love proko channel ! just one problem : he draws with a conte pencil / charcoal which are darker medium than graphite. Have you tutorials about graphite / pencil please ?

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