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    Shadow country war

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    Goodness.. that is.. there are a lot of things going on in there.
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    I don't like this as much as your people thread - there you had style a quirkiness. This looks like a copy and paste job, no coherence as a whole.

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    I like the concept and how each faction is depicted in its own way, I can tell who the "bad guys" are over the "good".

    The shadows are not dark enough thus the image looks too flat, sense of depth is severely lacking, I feel that the focal point is too mixed as my eyes dart around, the composition is weak and I think the colour palette could be improved. Take with a grain of salt as I am by no means a better artist lol.
    ❖Old Sketchbook
    ❖New Sketchbook

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    I think that the light source becomes difficult to understand. It is a characteristic that it is not realistic depiction in the diffused reflection light, but distortion came out with a persistent incorporation in Perth. Thank you for your good advice.

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