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    concept critic ,childhood dreams,

    conceptual critic nedded,,,,,,,,,,, clear study already reached,good ideas?
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    Unclear on what your aim was on the top one.

    Once again you have oddly formed bodies, no faces, no hands, no feet.. unfinished.

    The bottom one - no clue what's going on there. Nice clouds, but the rest is what ever.
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    Hey! I think I see what you're going for in both of these, and I like the idea. Of course, it still looks like it's in the thumbnail stages-- I get the impression that's intentional, though. Moving forward for your finished work you'll probably just want to make sure you have strong contrasts in the light and dark so that it's easier to read. Also, I'd just like to mention that the children in these pictures look hella muscular. If that's a stylistic choice then go buff kids, go! If you want it to look a bit more realistic I wouldn't emphasize those forms quite so much. Beautiful idea, by the way! I'd love to see the finished product.

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    thanks a lot !,,,,,,,,,,, look my other trhead here,,,,,,,, original artwork,,

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