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    shores next to fanasy

    this is all traditional work,,,irealy want to know what you think guys,,,,,
    critics n advices nedded,,,,,,,,
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    The top one - can you get that in a better light and more top down?


    Middle - not bad.. you could tighten up on the shadows and rock definition.


    Bottom - perceptive issues with the water.. The muddy wash over everything probably doesn't help the whole thing. The background and person in the hole look like barely thought out ideas and more after thoughts. No detain.
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