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    Plz critique...Im discouraged

    I need help. Be brutal.
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    This might be fine for what it is after a few tweaks.
    Hi. I’d like to see her blonde tones reflecting in her skin.
    I mean it seems like some cooors are too localized even though you are moving them around, green and blue still stick, did you use the same tone?

    Her shoulders seem too narrow or maybe her shirt is hiding her contours.

    Her highliggts need to be tightened or made more photograph referenced.

    her right eye looks flat and too bright.
    same with her teeth and ear
    fingeenails are too wide
    her hair needs shadow on bottom


    Compositionally, maybe it’s fine for a study, but if you had her hand touching that tiles tile and the other touching her chest then it might integrate better.


    What if if the tile was curling up the wall - stylized like her hair?

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    Thx

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    What are you feeling discouraged about?

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    Nothing. Just pursuing art as a career

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    Quote Originally Posted by MattyT View Post
    What are you feeling discouraged about?
    People were not giving him enough attention in his other post, because, you know, engaging the same troll over and over again works. Haha!
    My commentary is a gift to you.

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    I was just asking him the question, if that's alright with you?

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    Sure and I was offering my view point abet not with the usual bells or two whistles.
    My commentary is a gift to you.

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    No birds or 7s? What gives?

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    I am straying from that iconography. What do u think of my painting

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    It’s probably better, now. Who is this portrait of? Please post the phot references.

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    I am not gonna reveal. That would take away from the art

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    It's at least good enough for me to believe I found your reference from first guess of who you're painting...
    Second version is better than the first, but am not into this sort of art, so not sure what else to say...

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    Well, if this kind of art is working for you, why not ?! It makes you happy so...Wish you much success. Peace
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