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    original artwork

    i just want to know if theres aniThing good to take from this RELICS,,,,,,
    Critics n advices nededd,,,
    Godel Santos,,
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    Were any of these ever taken to finish? It'd be interesting to compare them here.

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    no,is as it is,,,,,,,,
    how do you see it finished?

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    what do you think about this one?,,,it closer to be finished i think,,,,,,,,,,,,
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    Why is paint smeared across it? No particular use for shape or form? It looks like a muddy mess.
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    how about like this?
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    I think from what I can see you're good at drawing, but all of these just look like a mess. I don't know if that's the way you scan them, photograph them or what, but your presentation needs work.

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    look the drawing was fine,,,,,then i aplied wood oil,,, twice,,,,,,it was fine, golden, but the foto is imposible ,,,,then i aplied watercolor in some parts,,,,,,,,,,and the drawing got complitly lost,,,,,,,

    shal post some good results for you to see,,,,,,,,,,,,

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    Okay fair enough, you might need to work on a better way of transferring your images. Also maybe not overwork the images too much.

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    compare this,,,the drawing in black and white and the artwork whit the same teknike,,,,,,,,,
    good and unike concept, neverdeles, called spectral sea vision,,,,,,,
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    Still a muddy mess. Sure your line work looks good, but then it's a dump of ruined crap coloring and what not on top.
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    I'm confused are you literally painting the drawing with wood varnish/oil over a piece of wood so it goes see-through?, why not use Photoshop at least?

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    I,,,I,,,think is art,,,,,,,

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    Oh Tecnhi I get it now. Yes, why are you making your drawings harder to look at?

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    look...im not going to do a spider tank,,,,,not even spiderman,,,,,i think it has its own ways ,,,,,its painting traditional......
    look at this,,,,
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    Really don't like the digital filter you're putting over your finished pieces.

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    why

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    Still need to work on drawing hands and feet as they are the things you hide the most in your drawings.

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    I like it. Good vibes and aincent ways.

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    You need to do more gesture studies to pull off what you are aiming for.Your proportions are way off. Also the end results are really messy. My suggestion is that you should forget about creating full images for a while and focus on the fundamentals.

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    look i already did ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,3 or like8 years,,
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    You never stop doing studies. It's not something where you can say "I did my time" and never keep it up. It's constant work and practice - and even in your studies you don't draw hands and faces. This study looks exactly like what you've been posting.

    I'm also with everyone else. Your linework has potential, I guess, but then you ruin it with bad coloring. I've never seen someone so aggressively destroy their own artwork before...Having the colored and black/white versions side by side is like looking at a "before" and "after" shot. It's super jarring that you don't see it yourself.

    I thought these were blown up thumbnails when I first saw them, which was why I asked if you'd take any to finish. None of these strike me as "finished pieces" if I'm being honest.

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    Just wanted to point out, that this is a place where people try to help with the "handcraft" aspect. Critizising style or personality is probably mostly a matter of taste. I don't know how far you've developed your understanding of color theory, and applying color in rendering and composition, but it most certainly couldn't hurt to improve whatever drawing skills are out of your comfort zone. The more you learn, the better, and breaking the rules is easier if you understand them.

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    I really like your art and your compositions and gestures are amazing!! I just wish your color would provide more clarity instead of less. Because you texture and color everything with huge broad strokes it's hard to differentiate one thing from another. But either way this is super good. I feel like I'm looking at some old master's prelims/ studies or something.
    Your proportions are pretty distorted and it could be nice to see higher detail in faces and hands possibly but I don't mind either of those things and I'm pretty sure you already know, I'm just mentioning it because this is a critique forum.
    Crazy nice stuff though, really.

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    thanks guys for your support critic and opinion....i understand all that you have pointed out..
    ..............but i cant paint digitaly..............
    lets see other people works now!!(for me to help out)

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    i know you like my pencil,,,,,,,,,here two MUSES,,,,
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