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    Character design Concept

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    Hi everyone Im new member here
    my name Zahdian and Im manga Artist from Indonesia , Here I make some concept for my Manga/comics
    please let me know what you all think
    I hope we can share more knowledge about Art

    Thank you
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    Do you have some of your manga posted online, or are you just knocking around random designs at the moment?

    The technical drawing is pretty good, but you might've over-designed your characters a bit. You wanna keep your main characters easier to draw (as you'll be drawing them the most, presumably), easily recognizable, and not too much of a pain to look at for your viewers. The first part is subjective, seeing how I don't know how easy / hard / fast / slow it is for you to draw these characters. For the last two you'll need to keep your readers in mind while you're designing them. Color could help with recognition, but a lot of what I'm seeing are just details, belts, patterns, and buckles just for the sake of looking cool.

    There's nothing inherently wrong with that if that's what you like. Keep in mind that some of the most popular manga characters are extremely recognizable, especially if the art is extremely detailed.

    TL;DR: Nice drawings. Too much style, not enough substance.

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