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    Star Wars VIII Rey and Luke

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    Hello artists! Been a while since I last posted here. Hope I am doing this correctly. Please, any feedback would be great.
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    It's fine, I don't know how I feel about the big anime eyes along side realistic everything else. One thing I would say is to look at photos of space, stars aren't that uniform in size.

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    AJams, I agree, the style (anime eyes) aren't consistent. Personally I like the anime eyes on Rey. Luke probably needs more work. It's hard to find a clear reference on an anime version of an old man. The stars are an easy fix.
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    Well if you're going to have anime eyes on one, you need them on both, otherwise they will look weird next to each other. All that said I still think Rey's eyes are toooo big.

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    I believe Rey's eye looks off due to proportion, not style.

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    1. Adjust Rey's eye.
    2. Redo Luke matching anime style.
    3. update with random stars.
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    You should study some skulls, asaro heads, construction (Loomis head and hand book and Proko) and from life, as it lacks structure.

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    What are those borders supposed to be? I get that they're supposed to be random "sci-fi" patterns or whatever, but you really don't need it. It's more of a distraction than anything. It's interesting to me that Rey here looks nothing like Daisy Ridely, but the Luke you drew is maybe a somewhat passable Mark Hamill. Looking at this, I feel confident that you had reference of Luke/Hamill to look at and just drew some anime scribbles for Rey.

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    Here's my another take.
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    Much improved.

    @MattyT: Those borders are rather iconic Star Wars wall lights. It's only something true fans would notice I guess.
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    We could be struck by lightning at any moment. What kind of universe is that?

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    Guess so. I have no idea what they are, to be honest. I'm more of a Sesame Street type of guy.

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    We could be struck by lightning at any moment. What kind of universe is that?

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    Biiiig improvement. Well done.

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