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    I'm a sucker for this kind of stuff, so if you ever finish the book lemme know where to find a copy.

    As for this particular illustration, I think it'd be better if the color clouds and your star doodles didn't touch or intercept at all. I think what you're going for is a separation of two dimensional spaces; a traveler from one that's interacting with another. With that in mind Crickibbit could stay black and white as a graphic indication that he isn't from the colorful nebula. As for the colors themselves, I'm not loving the execution here. The transitions between your inks / watercolor aren't smooth and look very labored in some places. That could be what you're going for? I don't think so, because some blotches of color look matte. In this case acrylic paint could be what you need for a flat, vibrant, color.

    In short, I like the concept but not the execution. I'd start over.

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