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    Beast Skull - Concept Art

    I just really would love to hear your opinion about this : )

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    You're having some issues with the perspective/anatomy of the skull; nothing a couple of hours drawing from good physical reference won't fix. Also note where the water coming from the eye sockets is jumping over the cheek bones instead of flowing down. Additionally, the water coming off the far cheek bone would be falling behind the mouth instead of on it. Again, nothing practicing from good reference won't fix.
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    David made a lot of good points already; my biggest issue is with the horns. This is a personal thing, but they're way too small to me. I'm guessing this is supposed to be some kind of huge ominous structure, lying in wait in the darkness. This skull would be even more imposing if the horns were a bit larger, or at least had more structure to them. Right now they're pretty flat looking, but like David said that's something you could fix with some good reference of ram horns.

    The pitch black all around the composition isn't doing much for me either, now that I look at it. Maybe add some kind of subtle mist back there?

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