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    New guy here, Hey need some quick critigue plz

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    New guy here, Hey need some quick critigue plz
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    What's the thick white fog and the hologram for? They're both really distracting. I can tell you're going for that Ghost in the Shell / Bladerunner lived-in techno vibe, but I don't think you quite made it. The only thing here that really resembles that is the ad hologram, and it looks more like an afterthought than it's supposed to be there.

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