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    Please critique my Proportions

    I really want to work on my proportions and have been doing lots of figure studies to help. If someone could just help me out and tell me how I can improve that would be great!!

    Thank you in advance

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    Two things. First of all, add feet and hands. Second, add enough detail to the head to show its direction, for instance by adding a center line and an eye line. You may want to study Loomis' mannikin.
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    Thank you so much! I’ll definitely check that out

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    You're definitely avoiding the hands and feet. Instead of drawing stick figures, try drawing the whole figure if you're going s far as doing these 30 second gesture exercises. That'll help more in the long run.

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