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    Smile Grass Roof Hut

    Hi there. So this is a recent piece I've been puttering away at. It is still very much a work in progress, but I feel it is at a point where it could probably use a more detached eye. I would love to hear any feedback you have. Thank you for your time, have a great day.

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    It's looking cool to me so far. At first glance I'm not a huge fan of the dead space on the upper right, or how the sign-post is hugging the right edge. I don't know if making the sign taller would necessarily fix the former, since then it'd compete with the height of the building a little. Do you even need it?
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    Nice shot! I would appreciate a bit more foreground, so I can see where everything is rooted...
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    Agreed - a flat green plane is okay, but add a happy little bush here or there.. maybe some cheerful tufts of grass.
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