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    Critique My Values

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    This is primarily a value study so critiques on that are appreciated. I got a little ahead of myself and added the background.


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    What jumps out to me are the multiple different light sources. Your figure is lit from the top of her head, the right cheek, on her left shoulder, and her right breast. For me the hair has the best values in terms of a believable transition from lights to darks.

    I'd start over by picking one light source and sticking with it.

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    Agreed, also the values on the right side of the face are very flat, if the light source is coming from the left that whole side of the head would be in darkness closer to the values of the hair

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