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    I like the narrative that is happening.

    The first thing I notice is that the colors looks a bit washed out. It looks like you are using white and black to make your colors darker or lighter which is causing this. There's also a lack of dimension. It looks like you wanted to make this look 3-dimensional but you quite during the process. Either make it completely flat or have it rendered. Otherwise it doesn't look like it's finished. I think the black outline is probably what's doing this.

    Hope this helps.

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    Hey,Thanks for the reply!while colouring, i generally start with the lightest shade of the chosen colour then work my way darker and darker, then just high light with white, i usually use pastel inspired colours. and i always want it to look 3D its not so much quitting as maybe lack of knowledge on how to achieve this, i do agree the thick black lines are not helping, in my newest drawing i am tryin to get away from, or will try harder, the black lines help me i guess in keeping a clean look! i will deffinitly take your advice and continue to push myself! thanks again!

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