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    Environment with rocks

    Hi to everyone! This is a digital painting that I did in December inspired in somebody exploring a different place. I would like to receive some critiques about antything you want. Thanks!

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    Looks nice.. though the perspective issues from the size of the guy to the length to the mountain leg to the tree size is off.. and the left.. cliff? has no depth.. but nifty.
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    Thank you modi123 for your critique! Here is the corrections applied to give it more deep changing some colors, perspective in the front corner of the biggest structure, adding more higher and textures to the cliff at the left. The size of the guy changed because I used a method found in Andrew Loomis book "Figure Drawing For all it's Worth". Hope this looks better, it's very helpful, motivates me to made more sketches and paintings.
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    This is already much better, making the man smaller was a good decision too. Looking at his shadow, the sun is hitting him from the back. If you want this picture to pop even more, you could add even stronger shadows to the mountain's right face and bottom.

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    Here is the changes at the shadows, you're right, shadows become darker depending of the intensity of the sun
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