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    looking for feedbacks, critics to improve

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    after i draw this i used carbon copy paper to copy this on watercolor paper. that is why there are hard lines.

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    i am having hard time drawing hair, cant catch the look i want yet. i cant figure out how to put my lines.


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    i have lack of focus and discipline. at least i am aware of that, so i can put up work each day to get better. what i struggle most is i get so impatient when drawing and painting, i hurry to finish and i cant see the forms correct when i do that. i spent some time this month drawing and painting after a few months of not even holding the pen nor brush.
    i have the urge to draw portraits of my neighbors and farm animals and study the environment, tho i havent believed in myself that i can do those well. i think i want to change that, even if i dont do well i should give it a try, it gotta start somewhere. my dream has been to travel and do portraits of people i meet on the way. i will start with farm animals and environment sketches, then when i feel warmed up and stronger i will visit my neighbors before september ends.

    ps. i dont know why previous images shows up gigantic. anyone has any idea?

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    some of my neighbors and i started a drawing club in the village, we are 3 people now, doing figure and still life drawings together and hoping to grow our number by time, so yay i am very happy to have some company and people to talk to about drawing and painting. following drawings are from the first meeting

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    hellooo, i am still drawing but i dont have time to update my sketcbook here however i am looking forward to do it soon!!
    so many farmwork and growing up. anyways, i am off for drawing. have fun day people!

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    Can't wait to see your update!

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    Hey! I noticed that you usually make scratchy lines in your work, my advice would be to use your shoulder or elbow joint to draw
    so you can make bigger strokes easily, check out the site drawabox.com as it helped me a lot, keep drawing!

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