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    Please critique my drawing :3

    Hey! I've been trying to improve my drawing for about six months and would appreciate any feedback on this drawing. Thanks! :-)
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    The way the swords are on the ground is a little awkward, it doesn't look like the swords are touching the ground, what you can do is:
    1. Make the ground interact with it (cracks in the ground, a little bit of dirt, and if it is stone or a more solid floor, add texture to make it seem more like there is actually ground)
    2. Add more shadows on the ground for the sword
    3. *Extra, this is more effective in combination of the others and (optional) for a weaker character* make him lean more on the sword to show weight or make it look like he is putting the words on the ground to keep him from falling

    And one more thing, his right leg seems too large. That's all! I hope this will help you!

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    Hey SuperstarE, thanks for the critique! My post didn't appear so I forgot about it :-) Also excuse the view - somehow I posted this tilted. I get what you mean and will try get some more environment interaction into the drawings.

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