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    Sacrifice - character artwork

    I would really like some feedback! Thanks!

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    His pants look really loose, how are they staying on without a belt?

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    That far leg threw me off. Is it connected into the arm pit?

    There's some odd perspective issues going on.. may or may not be solved with angling the feetsies.

    I see the top of some pants, but then a non panted knee cap. Wearing pants or not?

    Where's the light coming from? Why is there a super dark shadow under the knee cap (how knobby is that knee?) as if there is vertical light, but then the back shadow indicates light coming from the right.. etc

    Something seems off in the back. Is there a large hump or something I am not understanding with the character?

    The left eye seems like a pure profile shot.. should be rounder

    The horns appear to be non symmetrical. I would imagine a head on shot would be like a tilted crescent moon? Unsure if that was intentional.
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