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    Sylvanas artwork WIP

    Hey, it's my first post here o/


    I wanted a feedback from an illustration I'm doing with the purpose of being a splash art of Sylvanas. So everything directs to the main character at the end.


    Even more so in the matter of the foreshortening, the arch and the arm that she holds the gun...


    And when you hit your eye on the drawing, do you notice anything weird or something normal?
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    Archery is on of those things everyone always gets wrong. The bow itself isn't drawn back the way his right arm would indicate. The arrow is also slanted instead of straight. One should never hold the bow in front of themselves like this because you simply can't draw the bow back properly.
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    The best way to hunt in a mushroom forest is to climb on the back of a butterfly.

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    Thanks for feedback! I will try to fix it! o/

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    Also the back arm is foreshortened and the bow isn't, they're in 2 different perspectives!

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