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    Looking for feed back on self-portrait

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    the face/features seem a little bit too large in proportion to the head

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    the eyes and mouth are also a bit too flat. the eyelids have a thickness to them (of about 1-2 mm) and the eyelids on the left especially don't seem to be wrapped around the eyeball, but more of a flat plane. also the medial palpebral ligament(the one that sticks the eyelids to the eye socket should have a change in plane, thus value) . the corners of the mouth end in a big bulge of muscle where all the fibers intersect, and i think yours is a bit too flat in value. also the muscles of the neck aren't clearly defined and that takes a lot from the image; it just looks like more of a cylinder.
    all that would come second to what misterdistant said though

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