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    Wink Need critique on this (wip)

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    Would like to have critique on this before I proceed with coloring


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    Lots of perspective issues - right arm is broken, hammer, (why is it upside down) torso is on a different plane to the legs, the wings on the helmet are in the wrong perspective.
    Proportions - arms are a bit small, chest is lopsided, right knee is broken.

    Good start on the face though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by tenchi24 View Post
    Lots of perspective issues - right arm is broken, hammer, (why is it upside down) torso is on a different plane to the legs, the wings on the helmet are in the wrong perspective.
    Proportions - arms are a bit small, chest is lopsided, right knee is broken.

    Good start on the face though.
    Thanks a lot!! May I ask if you could explain more about the different plane? I tried figuring it out but I can't see exactly what you mean.
    Thanks again and I'll try to fix these problems

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    Do some studies on anatomy or take of photo of this pose with yourself before starting. It'll help you figure out where all the body landmarks are.
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