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    Comic Project 'Live Byte"

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    This looks a lot like advertising.

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    It doesn't bode well when the grammar on the front cover makes no sense.
    'from the creator comic INSIDE THE WOMAN' - what does that even mean?

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    And after I made my last post you changed the cover image, now I look like a raving lunatic. If you want another image critiqued post it in the thread rather than changing the main file. Otherwise it's just confusing..

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    Also removed the facebook links. Trying to make me and AJams look like we've lost it.

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    Tenchi, maybe it's a social experiment?

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    Wait, it's a woman?!

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    Maybe I'm doing it wrong, but that green b-hole thing in the chest is pushing the character's boobs under the arm pits? That would suck.


    The over all looks nice.. could do well with some inking... and maybe things like the character actually being wet when in a rain storm.
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