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    Critiques please

    Attachment 2299326Iíve been working on head construction and planes. Any feedback is appreciated


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    Would it hurt to rotate it 90 degrees clockwise next time?

    The ear looks jacked up and pushed farther back than it should.

    Decent shading of a cheek, but the eye area seems awfully large.
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    That ear is pretty ghastly. Wish Iíd caught that. Still not comfy with eyes

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    Don't worry about the planes of the face or individual features yet. You need to be able to construct a basic well-proportioned head in perspective first. Before that though you need to be able to construct a box in perspective and be comfortable measuring in perspective.
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    Sorry It's oriented correctly when I preview it then it turns when I post.

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    can you clarify what you mean when you say measure in perspective.

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