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    Hello, feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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    I'm really trying to improve, and push myself but I'm afraid I am hitting a plateau. I would love feedback on this. Thank you!


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    As an traditional anime, it looks good enough as a final work. I think there are some inconsistency in shading the body that misses the eye test.
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    Hello, thank you very much for taking the time out to review my work. I agree with your crit, and frankly I thought that the fabric on the arm between the elbow and tricep would be at the correct angle to really be able to see a highlight there. I dont quite understand what the markings in the upper right corner mean, am I correct in guessing that its not enough contrast to read as a shadow?

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    What's up with the line down the center mass?


    There's a chunk of the red edge on the bottom right cheek. Doesn't make sense with estimating volume of the head to arm placement.


    The arms look emaciated.


    Not a fan of the anime-mullet, but so it goes.
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    Quote Originally Posted by twin_tails View Post
    Hello, thank you very much for taking the time out to review my work. I agree with your crit, and frankly I thought that the fabric on the arm between the elbow and tricep would be at the correct angle to really be able to see a highlight there. I dont quite understand what the markings in the upper right corner mean, am I correct in guessing that its not enough contrast to read as a shadow?
    Hello, feedback would be greatly appreciated.I was going to mention that part on the elbow shouldn't be the only fold with strong highlight hence, the scale. As you can see on real leathers the sharp folds all exhibit the same values.

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    She needs a navel There should be more mass on (her) left side at the overlap of ribcage and underarm and more space between her arm and her neck. The curves are sexy, but I'm not buying the weight of the swords in relation to her pose. She looks like she might be falling forward or jumping through space, and her belts are in motion, but not the swords at her back. We should also see the angle of her ribcage on (her) right side, as when boobs are pushed out on a tiny frame, so is the ribcage. Consider changing the color of the background to contrast with her hair.
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