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    Need my drawings critiqued

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    Yes, this is my drawing style, I would like to know if I could improve these somehow, these are my first 2 drawings that I'm posting.

    Don't hold back any critique you may have


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    I don't even know if this is real or not. But surely placing actions within asterisks defeats the whole point of using a visual medium. We should know he's saying hi in a raspy voice by the way he looks not because he talks like he's using an internet forum.

    Is this real?

    Am I real?

    IMPORTANT EDIT: Also "sup" should have an apostrophe before it.
    Last edited by AJams; 4 Weeks Ago at 10:28 AM.

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    It’s tough to come to a forum full of artists and tell them not to use drugs
    Sketchbook (last updated June 20th, 2018)

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    I don't think it's real. Smells of troll wanting to outrage us snobby artists or something. They are weirdly expressive and cute, ala Oatmeal style.

    I'll play along.

    How dare you sir! Go learn some fundamentals, your proportions and anatomy are totally off mark!!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Grumpysaur View Post
    I don't think it's real. Smells of troll wanting to outrage us snobby artists or something. They are weirdly expressive and cute, ala Oatmeal style.

    I'll play along.

    How dare you sir! Go learn some fundamentals, your proportions and anatomy are totally off mark!!!!
    I am real, I draw cartoons, the drug poster was for school

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    This is real, I just draw like theodd1sout

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    Lol, not my intent.

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    They are cartoons, so of course stuff is off

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    Well if it's real, than I'd suggest studying theodd2sout as well as other artists who use a stripped down drawing style- The Oatmeal and Hyperbole and a Half are two that come to mind. Explore how they do facial expressions, gesture, and how they compose their simple compositions, and then you can start playing with how to make you're own stripped- down style. It looks like you possibly have the knack for expressions, but it's hard to see from just these examples.

    Just start plugging away at producing lots of content. Make sure you are working on your personal life and making observations about people and situations, to help feed that content.

    Good luck!

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