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    Grey Knight

    Just another piece to practice, feel free to critique it. ThanksName:  Grey-Knight-CGart.jpg
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    I dig it.. a few things though.


    First the hips seem way, way out from the shoulders as well as I think those legs need some power armor too (else how would they support it all?).


    The sword seems to get lost with the coloring and that hand holding it seems wonky.


    Lastly - this is a space marine! Outside of being freshly minted when does that armor ever look that clean, undamaged, or dented?
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    The biggest thing that sticks out to me is (his) left arm. Because the shoulder armor isn't rotated with the arm, the effect of the foreshortening is lost, making the hand and the gun feel like a weird part of the shoulder armor, not a hand extending into space. Also, I feel that the sword arm is too rigidly straight.

    Is the floaty skull guy his friend or his enemy? The narrative is unclear.

    The painterly shading on the head is quite nice.
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