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    Smile Please critique - first conceptart.org post!

    Hi!

    Looking for any critique or suggestions for the attached piece.

    I know it's not strictly in the realm of concept art or anything but hopefully you guys don't mind helping me out all the same!

    Thanks in advance!

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    Intresting - though the baby's face is off. Maybe that everything is on the same 'plane', ort the mouth is oddly directed.


    Is the kid's gut so prodigious it wraps around the top tower, or is there an odd knee in there?
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    I think this baby could be much cuter in it's terror. The proportions and anatomy on the baby could use some work. I've used liquify to try to get the proportions in shape, so obviously things got warped in the process but hopefully you can see what I mean about the proportions and anatomy.

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