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    Lightbulb Character design - Ellie Garcia

    I wrote a background story for her to help you visualize the whole thing better.
    Ellie Garcia is a 31 y.o former cop from New Mexico. She was a victim of an unfair setup by her colleagues back then which cost her giving back her badge and leaving the police.
    Outraged by the wrogness that the world was sinking in, she decided to give up her devotion for peace and justice. She joined then a group of illegal bikers called "Los Invasores" (The invaders). As their name suggests, they take control of every place they step in. Now, they control around 65% of New Mexico.
    Ellie was not welcomed by the majority of the club and was highly untrusted in the beginning, as everybody knew she was a cop. Until she had the courage to kill by her own hands her former cop partner in a robbery. That was the strongest proof of her devotion to the club. She then rapidly started gaining in authority and respect, climbing all the way up to the vice-captain grade.
    "Los Invadores" organize all types of crimes : Robbery (all sorts) most of the time, drug trafficking, rarely murders.


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    Greece, Ioannina
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    Really important that you put down the story.

    Few notes(kind of nitpicking though): She gives me the vibe of an engineer in some pics, and that's mostly because she holds a key in the first pic and her red jacket with white stripes help a little in that conclusion as well. Her color palette should be a little darker imo, like making her jeans/boots and scarf darker would help greatly. I would love to see few scenes of her (background, scene that she kills her ex-friend/cop) even if they're just quick sketches/thumbnails.

    Technical side, the motorbike has some perspective/foreshortening issues. mainly in the front light (and it looks a little too 2D at that part).

    Great work overall, keep up!

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    Thank you for the critique Solanos ! I did an illustration of her escaping from the police in her motocycle. I'll be posting it on tuesday. Make sure to check my DA or artstation if you don't want to miss that And the illustration where she kills her former partner is also a good idea! I'll think about it.
    Da : ramzykamen
    artstation: /kamenramzy

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