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    Redhead Warrior

    It was a fun painting, I learned a lot during the process.

    Any critique is welcome, so please, feel free to critique and comment.
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    Looks fantastic, there's probably nothing big to critique here. I like how you used the clouds to frame her head. One thing that bugs me is that the light source seems to be really warm and strong, but there's no reflections on the sword which should be the most reflective surface. Awesome job overall.

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    I dig it.. though I am not certain if this is supposed to be a giant, or just weird depth issues.

    The legs seem out of place with their deep crevices while the upper body is quite smooth. I would see if smoothing them over would help keep in line with everything.. also the leg coloring doesn't seem to match the body coloring.

    From the little I can see of the feet it looks like an issue of them actually on the ground plane or not.

    The far hand seems.. weird. I am not sure if it's a sizing of the whole hand or the thumb.

    Why is the belly and top of the boob-shelf reflecting green/blue?

    Speaking of - she must be a warrior of some merit to afford custom boob armor!
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    Yeah, that far hand seems exceptionally large and squid like

    The feet seem intentionally hidden and in weird angles. If you look at her knee cap and then at her foot angle of the closest leg, it doesn't look right.

    Like Anton said, the blade of the sword is weirdly flat. That material needs some work for sure

    Cool picture overall. Looks like you put a lot of time into it!

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    Hi there! Nice work I like her uplifted expression, and you did a nice job defining the features of her jawbone in a painterly way. I suggest tweaking the color of the sword hilt, as it's blending in with her armor.
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    Quote Originally Posted by modi123 View Post
    I dig it.. though I am not certain if this is supposed to be a giant, or just weird depth issues.

    The legs seem out of place with their deep crevices while the upper body is quite smooth. I would see if smoothing them over would help keep in line with everything.. also the leg coloring doesn't seem to match the body coloring.

    From the little I can see of the feet it looks like an issue of them actually on the ground plane or not.

    The far hand seems.. weird. I am not sure if it's a sizing of the whole hand or the thumb.

    Why is the belly and top of the boob-shelf reflecting green/blue?

    Speaking of - she must be a warrior of some merit to afford custom boob armor!
    - yeah, she is not a giant, so there's some weird depth issues. I was little confused about the depth, and as you can see, that confusion is appearing in the artwork.- I can see now the mistake on the left hand and on the legs, you're right.
    - And this blue/green was supposed to be a reflection of the sky.

    Thank you very much modi123! i'm glad you spent some time analysing my artwork!

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