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    Render Critique

    Final piece for my character design assignment. The design follows "visual family", which means the the designs of both characters should be identified as from the same family in appearance. E.g Power Rangers.
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    Cool

    Nice job! Some really weird and cool designs. Were you thinking of the 4 horsemen of the apocalypse? The colors you chose do a good job delineating form, but my eye doesn't really read them as lit from a specific light source. I'm not sure if that's an issue for this particular assignment. It would help if there were shadows beneath the figures to give them a sense of gravity.

    An easy way to create a light source would be to copy the figure's shapes, and simply use the lasso or brush selection tools, fill with black, and play around with shadow shape and opacity.

    I took the liberty of making a paintover for you to try to show what I mean. Name:  VisualFamily_paintover.jpg
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    Also, here is a snip of the layers I was working on. Layer masks are super handy for applying shadow and other opacity effects. I simply used your existing artwork and added black and white opacity shapes on top. Name:  layer panel.PNG
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    Oof. I hope that's helpful! Keep going with these designs, they're pretty ace
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    I had the lighting from top in mind, so I pushed the value further between both end. Since we're past yesterday's deadline I am going to call it here as finished.

    Thanks for the critique.
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