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    Arrow Critiques needed for rendering

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    How should i render the main body? The handle and the opening just don't like they fit...


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    It looks boring, and the perspective doesn't work.
    Next time, do a simple still life in a shadow box, single light source, take your time...
    Grinnikend door het leven...

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    I think it looks alright so far. Is this from reference? I'm a little bit dubious about the location and shape of the cast shadow from the rim, but you're doing fine.

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