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    Unhappy Critique of Substance Painting

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    I would be thankful for critique for my last piece. I feel that I'm still not there .


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    Too much white all over the place. The direction of the light sources are not defined. Keep it simpler when it comes to light to make for a more readable image and pay attention to where it is falling on the object. It's got potential though in terms of setting and depth, but yeah, now you need to work on your tonal values and understanding of light sources.

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    You need to work on your gesture , it's of vital to any art piece . Try to avoid stiffness in your character

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    Thanks for your replies. I will try to improve in these areas. I will make the iteration two of this painting.

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