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    need Critiques for this drawing

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    I used a 4b pencil, I think it was a decent lighting--except for the face--the hair I know it's already bad, I didn't put much effort into it, but feel free to tell me what is wrong with it.
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    Admitting you did not put much work into it will not encourage people to critique the work. As it is, it's just a random sketch, which again makes it harder to critique. If I had to pick something, I would say push your values more to show depth.

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    Excuse me, I will try to finish my drawings before submitting them for critiques. To be honest, I did put a lot of effort into this--just, not the hair, I don't know how to draw the textures and stuff, I need to practice more...
    I've made some adjustments, does this better?
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    Quote Originally Posted by ウナ人 View Post
    Excuse me, I will try to finish my drawings before submitting them for critiques. To be honest, I did put a lot of effort into this--just, not the hair, I don't know how to draw the textures and stuff, I need to practice more...
    I've made some adjustments, does this better?
    It's a decent sketch really, but it would be nice to see a lot more of them to figure out where you are exactly in your art journey. Make a sketchbook thread and post some more in there, send me a link when you do and I promise I will comment in it.

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    Here is my sketchbook:
    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...26#post4062226

    Thank you, I really need the critiques

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