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    Red face Dino on Bike WIP

    My first picture for a long time. I do not often draw, and at long intervals. Мostly to kill time in the evening.
    what do you think about the picture? composition, colors, style.. may be need to fix some things. I like when picture a bit untidy. and not sure about butterflies, it seems that need to add some background or details on the ground. would like to see any feedback.

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    It's an ok illustration. I am unclear if the butter fly is on the nose of the trex or not.


    You may want to add some of the cell shading to the butterflies as well.

    The far arm is missing the shoulder.
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    thx for tips.

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    I like it. My 6 year old happened to be walking by and she squealed and said it was sooo cute, so you have her vote. My opinion is that the gesture of the bike and the dino are mismatched a bit. The dino feels like she's leaning or turning because of her tail and the bike is very straight and static. I suggest either tweaking the bike or tweaking the gesture of the dino. Rough paintover alert:

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    wow, thanks! Really useful tips!

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    You painted my guardian angel t-rex, I love it!!!!

    (....Once I tried a guided visualization meditation with a guardian angel walking down a path with balloons of worries that was supposed to be popped...
    Now, the background music, just as this angel was walking down the path, sounded so much like the Jurassic Park theme, that my guardian angel turned into a happy t-rex holding some balloons while playfully chasing butterflies xD )

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