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    sorru guys,,,this one, how do you feel it?

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    It looks arbitrary, as I don't understand what it going on. We have a girl bathing, and an angel with a sword?
    Grinnikend door het leven...

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    Yes, figure out what is story behind it, what is connection between girl and angel, then figure out poses for that story. study bit more anatomy from Proko, Loomis, also that cut and paste look doesn't work, if you wanna use white of paper take a look: http://gurneyjourney.blogspot.com/20...ng-part-1.html

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    shes safe, its a place to rest the sorrow and behold,,in a river whit gates of sadnees and tranquility,,,
    ,,,,,,,,,,,,,its shure that you dont read poetry,,,,,,,,,

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    lets see if you understand this one of mine
    youngones,,,,,,,,,
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    If you are not going to take any of the critiques that people have given you then I am going to start locking your threads from now on. Go post in Deviantart if you are not interested in actually learning.

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    Why should i assept somethin that has no value,,,,,?
    That has not an idea or concept thats rigtingly given?
    Thats just critic for not lerning ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Its dening!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    If you're not here to learn I, and others, are rapidly coming to the conclusion you're here to troll. You've been told to study anatomy - go study it. You really don't want to end up like dotcov666 who is currently banned. Scribbles do not make a story - good composition does.

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